"You"

I never realized it when I met you first,
When I heard your magic voice first,
Nor did I realize when I had the magic touch,
But I realize it now and it’s rough.

Please forgive me of what I have said,
Of all the things I did unstated,
I know I have hurt you,
But it was unintentional and was insane.

I promise I will walk beside you,
And will never let you go,
Please walk with me beyond the mountains,
Where the day stops and the night meets.

I want my world written all over by you,
I want you to be with me in the first rain,
I want you to take me to the unknown lanes,
So please come back without giving further pain.

I now know you are the one,
And I miss you like never before,
Of all the words I can think,
You come first and it never sinks.

Comments

Anonymous said…
hey ...m back again. I am happy to be anonymous. And btw the way guys this young talent will make it to a big name for sure...

Good Luck!
July 6, 2009 at 2:46 PM
Namit said…
hehe..thnks so sweet of u anonymous ;)
July 6, 2009 at 2:50 PM
nitesh said…
namit u rocks....
July 7, 2009 at 12:31 AM
Namit said…
Thanks Nitesh!
July 7, 2009 at 12:35 AM
Unknown said…
Dude,

U might say it's for an imaginative gal. but I don't believe you .

This comes straight from the heart and can be felt .

Great one buddy
July 7, 2009 at 8:19 AM
Namit said…
Thanks bud!..It is imagination fr sure :).
July 7, 2009 at 8:22 AM
Yasmin said…
A very nice one! :)
July 22, 2009 at 8:58 AM
Namit said…
Thanks yasmin :)
July 22, 2009 at 11:46 AM
Namit said…
Thanks Apeksha!!..i hav high expectations!!lol
February 26, 2010 at 10:31 AM
Anonymous said…
u really write inspiring as well lovely poems..all the best for ur high expectation
do write smth wen u find her..
July 17, 2011 at 2:21 AM
Namit said…
thanks..b/w who is this?
July 17, 2011 at 9:32 PM
shwetankiit said…
u hv a god gifted talent .
July 22, 2011 at 7:26 AM
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